Hello everyone. Here is my final video out of the three videos series.
I apologise for the late upload and I hope to receive useful comments and critiques from everyone.
thank you.
I apologise for the late upload and I hope to receive useful comments and critiques from everyone.
thank you.
hi aaswan..congrats on your 3rd vid. It's great to see improvements that you have made as a presenter in this vid. You looked more calm and presentable. However there is still a room for improvement. You still need to improve on your voice projection and intonation (this happens due to the fact that you read from the screen)..so avoid doing that..have a plan on what you want to present..all the best!
ReplyDeleteHai :-)
ReplyDeleteFirst of all, congratulations for uploading your video. It takes a lot of courage for a person to actually upload a video of him or her sharing views in a social platform, as it can be seen by people around the globe!
Anyway, let's begin with the way you arrange your points, which for me, is quite good. The flow is rather smooth. In addition, you also use hand gestures while sharing your ideas with the audience.
Then again, in order to maintain the audience's attention to watch your video until the end, I suggest that you should improve the tone of your voice. The speech is delivered in a monotonous way.
All in all, good luck!
Good day, pal!
ReplyDeleteYour presentation is much better than before. You really improved your gestures, no longer stiff. I guess those videos comes in handy, and I enjoyed your speech.
Keep it up!
Hello. Your speech is clear, there is sequence of ideas presented. Your voice projection is good too. Just improve your facial expression and eye contact while delivering your speech. You have the potential to be a good orator. :-)
ReplyDeleteAs salam. Hello aaswan!
ReplyDeleteBravo on the third video! I can see your effort even though you are still down with your flu.
In terms of verbal communication, you a have a good voice projection that is enough to be heard loudly, which is far more better than in the previous speeches. Your intonation is no longer machine-like and dull when you put your stress and varies your intonation. However, you need to work out on your articulation and enunciation by trying to articulate your words clearly. In addition, try to control the pace of your delivery because at times, your voice is rushed, there is abrupt stop (few times, actually) and you are a little bit hesitate to pursue with your speech when you're lost track of your text. So, avoid reading from your text, ya?
As for non-verbal communication, you are appear to be more confident, which is very positive. Your facial expression is better than before... all you just need is a pinch of your dazzling smile throughout the delivery. Do maintain your eye contact with the audience too, okay? Well done aaswan, there are marked improvements in terms of your body language and gestures!
Content wise, everything is good. You have introduce your topic, organise your ideas with ample supporting details and summarise your speech.
Aaswan, you have a potential to be a good presenter. Keep it up and all the best! :)